I’ve had this song on the top of my playlist on replay. I think what I like so much about the song is the importance of that special place we share with a friend, sister, lover, and self.
Meet Me at Our Spot
When I close my eyes
I‘m under the apple tree
on my grandparents’ farm.
A patchwork quilt beneath me,
bubble clouds above.
Or,
I’m on the seventh hole,
moonlight drapes across
our outstretched legs,
my hand in yours.
We contemplate
futures we’ll never share.
If I close my eyes
I see the cement steps
of the Methodist church,
where fireflies are flickering,
where we plan fantasy worlds,
where we crack ourselves up
for no apparent reason.
Or
I’m on the blacktop.
Boys and basketballs
dot the sidelines.
I dribble, drive, defend…
You in your sweat soaked shirt
and glistening skin-
I can run this court for hours.
When I close my eyes
we are seated at our
usual table
ordering our usual items,
you: the fish and chips
me: the chowder.
It’s ritual but finite.
Or
I’m in our favorite diner
sitting shoulder to shoulder,
a booth for four
now accommodating six.
We whisper sacred secrets,
admit to our demons battles,
and laugh way too loudly.
We say we come for the flat whites
which we cup between our hands,
but really we come to stave off boredom
and to remain relevant.
This was full of the most beautiful sensory details. I loved it.
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This is inspiring and conjures up vivid memories of my own. Something about those cement steps and flickering fireflies feels so familiar.
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An absolute sensory delight transporting the reader from one nostalgic moment to the next. Your words sing in this slice.
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I loved all of the sensory details that you included in this poem and I love the idea of writing something like this – meet me at our spot – there are so many spots we can write about with family and friends. Thank you for sharing it.
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